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Pick up your lungs, let's see the city

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With my bag weighing heavily on my shoulder,
I stepped out into the crisp, sharp, autumn night's air.
The machine that was pushing the breath through my lungs
was pulling the power from my limbs, but I didn't care.
My agony reminded me that I was alive, that tonight was
important and even though street lights would light my way...
the inky black night would cover my actions.
Here's my first piece of literature for DA :D I was a bit nervous about posting it, but overwhelming support from my friends on DA have given me the strength to post it ;)
Thanks everyone!
And if I've used sucky punctuation, please tell me as I only really know the basics, but I want to improve :meow: ANY COMMENTS AND CRITIQUES ARE WELCOME! :heart:

PS: These literature categories suck!
PSS: I will post more drawings soon, Its just a keyboard is quicker than a scanner :giggle:
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Sun-of-Stazzz's avatar
This is great! :heart: it!